Memories flow through silence
Threading consciousness
Whispers of the past
Echoing
Through a cavernous mind
Sleep falls gently
Transforming
Reality into dream
Lost in subconcious moments
Reliving the hours
Left helpless to the night's illusions
Limbs thrash
Hoping to shatter the living visions
But the only relief
Lies in the dawn's slow rising
A contest entry
- 100 poems, more points to come! by katie-jo.
900 points, ended January 18, 2008, 42 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Your poem is amazing. It's a simple read but immensely intriguing.
"Through a cavernous mind
Sleep falls gently
Transforming
Reality into dream"
Quite possibly my favorite lines of this piece. Wonderfully done, dear poet.
Thank you for entering and all the best in the contest!
Happy New Year!
~kate-flamingo -
cool poem! i like the phrases. they have a haunted house you never know what's around the corner feel to them.
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thanks
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Good
Easy reading and a good flow. I like "Whispers of the past Echoing" Dreams do have echos of the past. Enjoyed reading it.
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thanks so much
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