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Passion
Unleashed flavor
Enticing this heart,you
Send captivating images
Soaring through that of loves promise
Tenderly you awaken me
Kisses, exploding heat
Everlasting
Passion
Sexy & Romantic glitter graphics from S e x i l u v . c o m
Passion
Unleashed flavor
Enticing this heart,you
Send captivating images
Soaring through that of loves promise
Tenderly you awaken me
Kisses, exploding heat
Everlasting
Passion
Author notes
Ok people Frst attempt at a rictameter.
I have a man whom is pretty sure that once i get to try these different forms i will love them..well to be honest im scared of death
I am trying so i hope it at least draws critiques for improvement.
Thanks Arkbear for link to help assist me and thanks to Griswold for believing in me, and sending link as well to assist me in growing.Love you.
A contest entry
- Form Contest - Rictameter by Seeking Peace.
750 points, ended August 21, 2007, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Yes you will get used to writing in form, to begin with the syllable count can be a pain, well done on a great piece
Thank you for taking the time to enter this contest, I wish you the best of luck
Karen -
Beautiful,
So fun trying to find different forms to express the passion within you.
I adore this, and thanks so much for sharing you Tory, keep up the great works. Big 
's Much love hun~
-Timothy aka poeticweaver~ xo
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I can dance with this. The passion rich and the love so strong, the dance a dance of wanton bliss and the hands of the lover stroke the fire to a fever pitch.
Love, Tom B.
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This is wonderfully done Tory, I Love that you are doing form poems, they are very nice to do to break the monotony of freeform rhyme sometimes. I really like this one. Love you Tory. Scott
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wow this is awsome
i really love the flow of it and i love the emotions and imagery painted within
i loved this
well done and best of luck
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Great job with this one!
It's wonderful to see that you
are trying new forms. Keep it
up and best of luck to you with
this one!
Jeremy0826 -
great poem, I love shape poetry it is not only to read but a picture in itself! Good job....
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Bang on the button yet again my friend, you are definitely getting the the hang of these form poems. well done.
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This is pretty good. good luck! great job! keep it up!
Crimson -
you did great dear Tory and you will do good with them, unlike me, you can learn, I am just to scared but one thing that will help me, I am going to start taking the classes offer here on AP
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i love it
it gives beautiful imagery and the words just drew me in, great job!!!!
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