The spirit of tomorrow sits,
Beneath the turquoise skies,
Watching the final sunset,
As this day slowly dies,
Waiting for that moment,
When the sunlight strokes her skin,
With dawn as her companion,
She helps the day begin,
All day she softly wanders,
Through our minds, our hearts, our souls,
Pushing people onward,
Towards their final goals,
As dusk descends upon us,
She's back beneath her tree,
Waiting for the new day,
To set her spirit free.
In a list
A contest entry
- Picture Inspiration III by Samplette.
475 points, ended August 22, 2007, 11 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is by far one of my favorite poems. This is, like she said, beautiful & uplifting. I'm happy I read this. It was like a milky-way for the mind & soul, lol. Keep up the good work.
-Dru-
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Lovely write. Very well crafted. Great flow and rhyme. I enjoyed the read. Thank you for entering the contest.
Sam
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Beautiful & Uplifting
full of wonderful images
So glad I clicked.
Hugs onesugar
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GOOD
Enjoyed your write. I like "All day she softly wanders,
Through our minds, our hearts, our souls," Good imagery.
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stunning, lovely images here, I love the first verse, its fits perfectly and its written beautifully. well done X
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