Sometimes you hurt me and make me cry
But guess what
I bet if I wanted to
I could hurt you and make you cry
You call and tell me that you love me
And how much you've missed me
Since we broke up
So here i go
I say this to you
Make up your mind
On what you want
Because if you don't decide soon
I wont be here for you
To hurt or to love
So I leave the choice up to you
And I hope that you wont hurt me again.
A contest entry
- PREWRITES!!!!!! by Luminescence.
450 points, ended March 5, 2008, 69 entries
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Comments
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Very Very Very....very very touching and so true to so many people. Although it's not very dark, I can totally feel the emotion...
Make up your mind
On what you want
Because if you don't decide soon
I wont be here for you
I love those words!!!! They're so strong. I just love it.
Thank you for entering this contest and good luck.
~Lanivity

