A candlelit dinner with music down low,
the love of my life, I do love her so.
Small talk and flirting all night long,
how was your day? Traffic sucked on the way home.
Cuddling on the couch afterwards,
watching a movie, arm around her shoulder,
just her and me.
Popcorn fight, laughter, a slow night together,
talk about the weather, the war and life in general.
Kisses on neck, whispered words in the ear,
hands start to roam, time for bed my dear.
Author notes
I Love You Tory.
In a list
A contest entry
- Jpg Contest #4 - Ends at dinnertime by CarolDesjarlais.
600 points, ended August 18, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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if only to have a night like that xxxxxxxx well done my dear friend well done
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I felt that line.....well done and thank you for entering.
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This was beautiful. A very sweet round up of the days events then to the sweet sound of romance. wonderful imagery and beautiful flow. Thnk you
I love you too
Tory
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Oh man loved the last two lines of this.
Build up was nice too.
Wonderfully done,
You are always
such a pleasure to read.
delila
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"Kisses on neck, whispered words in the ear,
hands start to roam, time for bed my dear."
Yeahhh, kisses on the neck will do it, everytime. 
A lovely, loving penning, filled with promise. Good luck in Carol's contest. Be well, Poet. 
Wanda
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oooo it was like a small short storyof the day yet it was cpativating and full of emotion which was intense leaveing the reader wanting more
wonderfully written well done and best of luck
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LOL Daughter dear, If I gave you any more it would have to be labeled Adult!!
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he he....i told you i was innocent
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And I have a stealth fighter in the backyard for sale, wanna buy it?
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why not i could have him as a servant for things
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