Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Wanda's World

Wanda's world id full of pleasure

Glowing gardens holding hidden treasure

Whose affluent flowers of yellow and green

Have prosperous petals with scents so serene

 

Wanda's world is alive with emotion

Majestic mountains with graceful motions

Phosphorescent forests and a sapphire sea

Electric clouds afloat on a brisk blue breeze

 

Wanda's world is full of meadows

Fertile fields for reaping rainbows

Sparkling portals and strange orchestrations

Lost in a collage of their own creations

 

Scarlet moons rise in a kaleidoscope sky

An orange sunset paints a sensual sigh

Dreams for the denizen dance on high

Take her hand and she'll teach you to fly

 

Cause in this world where words sit supreme

Wanda {aka} Night Hope... hovers

As its reigning Queen

~

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

If you haven't had the pleasure of reading some of the best Poetry on AP,

do yourself a favor and read "Night Hope" http://allpoetry.com/Night%20Hope

You'll thank me for bringing her to your attention!

In a list

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 12 of 12

  • Alex Hex
    May 1, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    awesome ! really suitable entry to my contest ! it was really beautiful ! to point out my favorite lines
    i would say

    "Scarlet moons rise in a kaleidoscope sky

    An orange sunset paints a sensual sigh

    Dreams for the denizen dance on high

    Take her hand and she'll teach you to fly "

    there was no least favorite lines !! i loved it totally !!

    wonderful write , keep up the good work ,

    your friend and host ,
    Alex hex


  • Eternal-Jammy-Jam
    August 31, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    cool wicked nice one


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    August 26, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    This is a wonderful piece!
    I love the way that you put this together and your title. Wanda's World is a place that I would love to visit one day. Beautiful imagery in this! Thank you
    very much for your entry here. I appreciate it and wish you the best of luck with it in my contest!




    Jeremy0826


  • kennethlaney
    August 21, 2007
    Edit | Reply

    Very good

    I liked it very much. Keep up the good work!


  • katie-jo
    August 20, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    i love your style. you not only make known your emotions, you make them felt.


  • Nicolette gold member
    August 19, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    I so loved the singing quality of this poem...you've written a new song here, Nicholas and I'm sure her heart is humming along and echoing these rhymes. Her world is indeed full of pleasures and meadows, and alive with emotions - and of course poetry and light. A song fitting for the queen of poetry. A lovely, lovely tribute, my friend.

    ~ Nicolette


    • PageTurner
      August 19, 2007
      Edit | Reply
      I'm humbled by your words, Nic. Getting one of Wanda's closest Friends approval ...Sighh, you made my day!


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    August 19, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    Aw, we all owe her dearly then, for your poetry has come to pinacles of great penning. This is precious, and true of her, for sure.

    • PageTurner
      August 19, 2007
      Edit | Reply
      Coming from you this is precious praise to me. I thank you, Carol.


  • Cat
    August 19, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    this is such a wonderful tribute to our friend wanda- i am sure that she loves every word of it- the only thing i'm not sure of if the moon about to drop on our poor wanda's head... that would be terrible
    thank you so much for honoring
    wanda with your talent and words.

    m


    • PageTurner
      August 19, 2007
      Edit | Reply
      Do not worry 'bout the moon falling on our Wanda, Mary. Think of it as her Halo! We can't have it hittin' her head and spillin' out all her wunnerful words. Right?

1 - 12 of 12