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Imprisoned in a fatal kiss,
such is passion's embrace
licking souls,
ardorous destruction,
is salvation
for love-questions,
never take 'no'
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A contest entry
- A Quickie by poetryality.
525 points, ended August 18, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Those few words managed to protray the dark power of love. I think it was a pretty good poem. Keep it up!
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EEEEEE yessh! this form of poetry is the kind i love dearly, the opening is genious!!
i absolutley love it.
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Wow... a powerful opening couplet that just grabs the reader's attention. Nicely done, and thank you for sharing
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Well done on this one. Short but sweet. You really said a lot in such a few lines.
Good job.
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I firstly took a look at the prompt to see how you came to this, and I must say that you have done a wonderful job with it.
well done
Leander
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Clever, very clever. You took a different road than most with the prompt. I love the fact that you seemingly insisted on the affirmative when it comes to love. For you to only be allowed the use of twenty words, your language usage is stellar. An excellent entry.
A wonderful take on the prompt here Poet. You followed all the rules to the letter. Thank you for this entry in my contest. I wish you the best in all your endeavors.
Much Love & Respect ♥
Renee
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