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Changing to perfection

Skinny, Pretty
Smart, Funny

What I wouldn't do to be perfect

Tried so hard to impress
the unimpressive

I'll never me good enough

To be perfect
to change me from me

I wanna be perfect
and I try so hard

It's never good enough
No matter how hard I try

I'll never be her.

She's skinny
and pretty

She's smart and funny
I can't me her

I've tried so hard
to change me

To me skinny and pretty
and smart and funny

but this person staring at me
from the mirror in the bathroom

isn't her. I can't be her
I can't be the one who left you

I can't be the girl who holds such perfection

I'm me, and It hurts so bad trying to change.

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  • SweetAngel122989
    March 3, 2008

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    Never change who you are for anybody or anything. Trust me it usually ends up worse than before. You did an amazing job! Great job and keep it up!!!


  • Doomsayer
    September 2, 2007

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    Excellent

    This is a really good topic to write about because I think everyone knows what it's like to want to be something [or someone] they're not. Good Job Hope!