the catheral walls open
cubicles filled with light
and there in the stairs to forever
the power to reach insight.
Peacefully through this passage,
a danced, danced alone...
heaven sings with much passion
each note spirit-strong.
The burst of grace does happen,
the truth comes out to breathe,
alone this could not happen,
for god stood there indeed.
A contest entry
- EMPTINESS DANCING by maa.
543 points, ended August 20, 2007, 15 entries
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Comments
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a very spirit-filled poem full of faith and marvel ... the atmosphere of peacefulness created through your beautiful imagery is very conducive for contemplation and introspection ... a truly inspiring verse ...
thank you so much for sharing your gift,
maa
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Even if you are still mending this, it is beautiful and passionate. Your words seem to dance. I am so impressed with it already.
Carrie
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Carrie thank you so much for your beautiful words...
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