a diet whore,a zero
living life under a thundercloud
as her lilac dreams got ran over on the freeway
as the candles got burnt out in the rain
and cigarettes were smoked,
they didn't know the truth
she was like this all along.
she was different.
she was in camofladge,and you're not that lucky.
she was completely visible in the heat of the starlight,but you never had the chance,chewing up tobacco.
lucky charm,skittles,and starbursts could never compare,once you were hooked with your new addiction.
Truth was,you were a drug addict,and she was 2 or 3 years younger.
She was also very heartbroken.
you were just an idiot.
Author notes
"The human mind is a funny thing........"
A contest entry
- LuckyCharms & BrokenHearts by Dead Star--x.
550 points, ended September 6, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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have i ever told you how much i love this,sen?
becuz i do
=]
-phoenix
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i really like this poem
you used pretty much all of the words from what i remember
i like the story & everything just went well together
welcome to the finalists list
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Thanks! i'm usually better at free-verse than rhyme
i hope you don't mind i made the contest title and the poem title the same,i really couldn't think of a title that sounded better
thanks again!
-candyy <3
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