can candlelight have a pulse?
Author notes
look at a flame on a candle...see how pure and innocent, beatifull it is
the line is asking whether something like that can exist in a living creature, or are we tainted?
it makes more sense if yew actually watch a flame for a few seconds and think about it...
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Comments
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This was very good. A while back I was taught how to control the energy of a candle from across the room. Haven't done it in a while, though. Might be kind of rusty.
Write on.
~*~SP~*~
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yeai can see what you mean it seems to hum along in its own way sometimes
thanx for entering & good luck
CureMyTragedy
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