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I Would Like to Buy a Sister

I would like to buy a sister
I am lonely as can be
I saw you in the window
Won’t you come and play with me

We could blackmail lawnmowers
with their scandalous affairs
Search for ceiling treasures
and gather questioning stares

Knit a dress of feather grey
to match your partridge hat
And then parade throughout town
like we are just all that

We’ll stay up well past midnight
and drown in root beer floats
And talk until our eyes pop out
from reading crazy notes

I know you are expensive
that’s why I brought this game
It’s loaded with such pretty cash
of yellow, red and green

I know you’ll like to be my sis
your safe with me I’m sure
And I will not be lonely
for you will be my cure

Author notes

Oh pick me, pick me hehe

Okay, I used:
Sister
Lawnmower
Stare
Partridge
Hat
Midnight
Root Beer
Eyes
Notes
Game
Safe

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  • Swan song gold member
    September 21, 2007

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    I reall enjoyed this light poem There are some poems one reads and they feel a lightness in their heart and that is what this poem did for me. Well done poet. Janice M Picket writes similiar poems you would do well to read her


  • ErikAmbrose
    August 20, 2007

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    I think you have a new fan.
    I could feel the lonely desperation coming from the narrator; if it weren't for the laughter, I think I'd might cry.


  • tawk gold member
    August 19, 2007

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    Congrats on the Gold well deserved!! What a unique and funny write. So much emotion weaved throughout your write. You made me laugh have a great morning


  • captain howdy
    August 18, 2007

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    LOL!!! I love it! *big cheesy grin* Best of luck to you in the contest! Thanks for entering!