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Your Turn....

                          Q U A C K
                          U
                        Z A P P Y 
                          K
                J A Z Z Y
                A    A 
                C    X 
                K    E 
  F    J I F F Y    S 
  U    U
  R    N
  Z I N K Y
  Y      Y
   
    "My turn?" I don't have ZILCH.
"Wait...CKEBEZ...makes ZEBECH, your turn."

Man this thinking makes me WHEEZY
ZINCKY, FROWZY, BLOWZY, QUEASY...

Looking for a word that rhymes,
hmmmm, not SCHIZY, maybe ZYMES...your turn.

OOPHS and KUDZU
that's a vine
think I'll find a glass of wine
kick back and listen to some MUZHIK....your turn.                   

Author notes

JAZZY 23JACKY 21 JIFFY 21 JUNKY 21 QUAKY 21 ZAPPY 21 ZAXES 21 ZINKY 21 FURZY 20 QUACK 20 = 210 points

plus...ZILCH. 19 ZEBECH 23 WHEEZY 24 ZINCKY 24
FROWZY 24 BLOWZY 23 QUEASY 27 SCHIZY 23
ZYMES 19 OOPHS 19 KUDZU 19 MUZHIK 24 = 258

TOTAL POINTS = 468

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  • moon2u
    August 18, 2007
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    hahahahaha
    omg this is clever!


  • Fairy Nutty Buddy silver member
    August 18, 2007
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    Hahaha! Made me laugh, but not much of a poem to read.


    • butterflywriter
      August 18, 2007
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      hi there...

      it was early when I wrote the first round, poetried it up a bit...thanks for the contest, it was fun.

      • Fairy Nutty Buddy silver member
        August 18, 2007
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        Haha! Thanks for "poetring" it up a bit. And, now I don't have to look up the meaning to Kudzu. Don't drink too much wine and have fun.