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Chasing Kate

Ruth was tired

the soles of her feet were hurting
her head ached
and she wanted to sit down in a big
soft chair and stay there for a long time

if there was one thing she really disliked about being
    appropriated as a mentor to so many people
it was having to chase them when they were rushing all over
    the place

why did angry
hurt people have to walk so fast?

~

Author notes

Created using my new instant free verse method: take a paragraph of prose, exchange all the punctuation for line breaks and make everything lower case. This is from chapter five of my novel-in-progress, Summertime.

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