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My Sister

What people do is sometimes strange
Odd and downright crazy
Like wearing your clothes inside out
Or laying down and sniffing a daisy

My sister for instance
Although very mellow
Tends to wear a fake beard
And people think she's a fellow

She's a definite lady
I can assure you of that
She has some fine jewelry
And a beautiful hat

My sister is four
And the apple of my eye
Even when she's pretending
To be a daring samurai

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Words used - eye, crazy, mellow, strange, jewelry, sister, beard, lady, hat, samurai.

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  • Rhyming From Rehab gold member
    August 29, 2007

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    Wonderful

    I really like the way this is written. It conjours up wonderful memories of when I use to play as a child!


  • crimsondew silver member
    August 19, 2007

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    Beautiful sentiments presented here for your cute sister..But that is how sisters are- adorable in whatever they do!
    All the best!


  • captain howdy
    August 18, 2007

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    Oh! I like that you managed to use the word bank and still rhyme and flow nicely! Best of luck! Thanks for entering!