Fortune beckons,
soft and pleading,
soothes my heart,
retains its beating;
Orbs of maple
stir the fire,
words of ardor
stoke desire,
faithful comfort,
fingers laced,
night in sunshine,
face-to-face..
Pleasure wrapped
like wounds, re-open,
gifted to
intense explosion..
Loyal to the
silent secret,
question as to
how we keep it;
Eyes on mine,
the sacred lover,
Live or die
for one another.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wickeddddd!! Now for some reason, I thought of the duality of man...
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Truely astounding! It has perfect symetry and the emotions pull you under. It's impossible to read and not be sucked into the moment you are describing. I loved it alot. My new fav of the day. Keep on writing.
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This is absolutely exquisite... the flow and rhyme roll off the tongue with perfection. I love how you ended this, very powerful wording.
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