Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

[ The pure white of the pearl ]

The pure white of the pearl
lay against her soft neck.
"Tilt your head this way" he coaxed.
He always knew how to manipulate,
either his brush or his subjects.
For Beauty was a well sought after friend in his eyes.
He created it himself,
or stole anothers for his use.
Much praise was aquitted his name,
though not all was due.
Shut away in his room,
for hours and hours.
Sometimes with nothing to produce.
Although he died young,
he lived on eternally.
If not, but through, his manipulation.
His brush, his paints, his picturesque scenes,
but mainly through one source.
That of which was,
The Girl with the Pearl Earring.

Author notes

This poem is about the painting done by dutch artist Johanne Vermeer. It was painted in the 1680's. Also, it is now a book, and a movie with colin firth and scarlette johanson.

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • alyssaxo
    March 1, 2008
    Edit | Reply

    well structured and neat

    aw, this was really unique and neat. i love your poetry, some talent you've got here(:


  • yours to hold
    August 19, 2007
    Edit | Reply

    WOW!

    Amazing! I'm speechless! This is a WONDERFUL poem! It is just so beautiful!


  • twinkling of an eye
    August 19, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    This is a great piece! Someone I know did her own version of the painting a while ago. I saw it in progress every few days, so this brings back some vivid memories. Thanks for sharing!


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    August 18, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    This was an extremely good poem. The flow was good, and the emotion was there. The only thing is, the rules state that you must put the event in your author's note. Please do so soon, as the contest is ending tomorrow.
    Thanks for entering the contest!
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~