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Un-touch

My words can bind
Or they can cut
you free

Funny how real
the untouchable
can be.

Please tell me what you think

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  • hilly
    August 30, 2007
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    I'm going to remove this, as I think it needs more developing. Please don't take it personally.


  • hilly
    August 23, 2007

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    Very short, generally a great thing in my book, but it seems like not much was said. It had no real effect on me.


  • ShadowsDream
    August 18, 2007

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    great job fairy. it is funny how much u can tell someone in such little words and it be the truth. great job.


  • Merry Christmas
    August 18, 2007
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    I love this! Mesa wishes mesa could write awesome poetry like you.