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Finding Light

i seek a cure
for the world
its bleak lonely greys
purity is a haze
knowledge of what is truly good
and what is glazed
would you go on a journey
for truth
we'll be learning new ways
our youth
we'll be saving
and burning the torch
of the new days
and waving
our flags
no longer in rags
no longer be slaving
to destructive hating
an end to this maze
we'll be singing praise
for the rest of our days

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  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    January 7, 2008

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    very nice poem
    Thank you for taking the time to enter my contest. I wsh you the best of luck

    Redwing Spirit