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My Evil Depths

I feel like ripping the eyes from someones' sockets
My breath is shaking like a rabid beast
Tears are foaming from their pits
My back is tense in pain
My stomach twists with sharp stabbing agony

I want to scream with obscene threats
I want to make myself puke with force
I want to get beaten so I have reason to fight like hell back
I want to snap off a rib and use it as a knife
I want to burn the skin and pull it all off

My intentions weaken
I can't do any of it
My heart is too strong
I wade in my aching body
My fix is undercover until it's discovered

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  • Believer in myself
    August 24, 2007
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    Vahn. You are amazing. I really love this poem. It shows true passion for pain. Great job!