A chilling frost has captured me;
to bring me here
under your spell.
Silver wisps from moonlit waters
weave into the placid kingdom
in which you dwell.
Mesmerized by your sapphire silhouette,
I am sleeping soundly,
yet wide a wake.
Your passion swallows the surrounding silence
growing stronger with
each breath I take
The gentle rays of midnight leave me here
enchanted by the pearly light
dancing on your face.
I have lost myself in your sea just to be
encompassed in a moment
of your fine grace.
Author notes
Picture inspired
http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r307/poisonedrationality/moon.gif
A contest entry
- hard to impress judge, you know you want it. by Stormy Sky.
440 points, ended August 30, 2007, 4 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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beautiful poem, loved the entire thing. congratulations on the gold
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This is lovely. It sort of makes me sigh and say Oh Bliss. Good luck in the contest.
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oooh! i like it. Thankfully you described it well enough that I knew exactly what picture I'd sent you. congradulations on that.
Mesmerized by your sapphire silhouette,
I am sleeping soundly,
yet wide a wake.
Your passion swallows the surrounding silence
growing stronger with
each breath I take
this was my favorite stanza. well, actually, i loved them all but I really liked this one in particulare. Thank you, good write and good luck!
stormy
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