Little red-cap
bad as can be
but was blind
and could not see
then she met big bad me!
I am the wolf
big and strong
with sharpened teeth
I shall take her arm
but grandma I will not harm.
There she goes
happy as can be
skipping right into a tree
broken and down
how big she frowns.
I am the wolf
ready to eat
season her up
boil till she's good to eat
my oh my what a feat.
Little red-cap
such a delight
not many calories
perfect and cheap
how could that be beat?
Author notes
"fairytales rock!" I used Little Red-Cap by the Grimm Brothers but it is kinda twisted. . .and not really close to theirs. . .
A contest entry
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600 points, ended August 19, 2007, 18 entries
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Comments
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What a twisted and very funny tale of little red riding hood. I so enjoyed reading. Wonderful imagery and flow. Thanks for bringing a smile to my face this morning
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did he eat her or sell her as a breakfast ceral? interesting and confusing. thanks for following the directions. wow, you call little red riding hood little red cap. very strange, must be different regions. oh well. thanks for entering. good luck
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