I BELIEVE
I do believe that angels live and breathe
I can feel them moving within my soul
Bringing me a little closer every day
To a life that seems far and impossible
Yet so attainable and lived by few
They reign over the entire universe
In eternal harmony and bliss
A place that we have come to know as Heaven
Author notes
Prompt: Heaven
60 Words
A contest entry
- My 1st PIF Quicky Contest 10/30/30 by x Star Dust x.
300 points, ended August 17, 2007, 3 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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you have done a great job here Jeremy, once again.
i ALWAYS love reading your poems because they give off such powerful images...its amazing!
keep up the amazing work my friend -
Ah what a gem this piece is great write
Loved each inspiring word.
Congrats on the trophy
delila
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great take on the prompt. Often we need angels to sort
us through the crap we go through daily.Heaven , i cant wait to get there, then i can put away all the
craziness in this life, as i look in from the outside, things become clearer. I am living in hell, and until He is ready, then will i see the harmonious bliss evryone wants to see, for how can they say it is harmonious bliss when they havent been there yet
just have to wait and see. meanwhile suffer here on earth a little longer.
great job
tory
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Two thumbs up for you! Nice job on the entry.... Good luck to you!
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