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Daddys Gone Now

I Sit Here And Wait
Days Go Bye
My Eyes Start To ache
Sleepless Nights
Im Dieing Inside
The Smiles Long Fated From My Face

"Mummy Why Do You Cry?"

Why Havent You Yet Come Home
Why Am i Still Waiting By The Phone
Weeks Have Past
My Life Has To

"Mummy? I Dont Understand Mummy, When Daddy Comeing Home?"

I Had To Be Stong
For My Little One

Daddys not comeing
My Dear Younge One
He Has A New Life
He Thinks A Better son

Years Have Past
My Child Is Grown
He is now a Daddy of his own
And Now My Smile Is Bold And Strong

Read This
And Remember
when u didnt come home
you didnt just leave me
You left your son Alone 

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  • crystallynnbradford
    September 13, 2007

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    this is really sad and I now the feeling because my biological father left my mother to raise 3 girls by herself and i haven't seen him in 14 years and I'm 19 now....this is a really good piece and dead beat dads suck


  • soft blush
    August 25, 2007

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    Oh, my. This was SO sad. I can't even think of what going through something like this is like. Good poem.


    • xHeartofDarknessx
      September 9, 2007
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      thats for that =]
      bit of a mixed of to storys ths is
      my mams ex left her for another woman and now my brothers haveing baby so hes a daddy of his own
      and well my dad left her as well when they where together and well we used to sit by the phone after a hiwl my mam give up and it would b me that waits for a call or a knock at the door
      so itrs not all happenign in one 2 storyes mixed in one poem =]
      xxx