Wanton Desire

I lay on golden sands

caressed by gentle waves,

wanton desire sweeps over me,

the warmth of the dying sun

kissing my body as I lay,

awaiting my lover to complete me,

to extinguish the fire within,

I want to drown in the ecstasy

of his touch,

his gentle fingers caressing my skin

awakening the woman within,

his kiss to seal my fate,

his love to bind me

forever to him.

Author notes

Anonymous, please do not use my name, thank you.

In a list

A contest entry

Delightful Naughty Night Contest 24 hours or so. by delightfulmess. 450 points, ended August 19, 2007, 8 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Take Me By Moonlight. by Poetryintheblood. 450 points, ended September 29, 18 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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cricketjeff
September 29
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You beat me

Great stuff Sue!
Poetryintheblood
September 29

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Thank you for your most beautifully sensual entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
Tercarro
August 20, 2007
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I'm right there
I am right there with you, Love it, the place the moment and the idea.
Terry
buggles
August 19, 2007
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wonderfully crafted piece of poetry. very sensual. i loved it,Eddy
delightfulmess
August 18, 2007

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Oh yes wonderful take love this love this
Great imagery. The pic and poem look good together
as well which I believe is important.
Wonderfully done.

delila
Wayne Leon Learmond
August 18, 2007

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Superb Sensual Writing
Sensual and stunning writing here for sure. Wonderful flow and imagery. Love pours throughout this piece. Well done Sue, on another brilliant piece..

Wayne

xxx
arafura
August 18, 2007

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fire within...!
Very sensual work poet! You speak the language of love and passion very well!
Good luck in the contest!
moonbumps
August 18, 2007

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Hot or what?!
Phew!
Even more reason to go work out at the gym this morning!
Hot stuff baby.
I'm just going to take a quick shower fore I go!
Speak soon!
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Haunted-Memory
August 17, 2007

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Excellent
This is excellent very sensual with a great passion and desire expressed, a truely wonderful write for this picture, with a soft sensual feminine touch. Wishing you all the best in this contest Brian.
Lily otv
August 17, 2007

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Oh this is very sensual, tastefully written and compliments the mood of the picture so well. My favourite lines are "awakening the woman within, / his kiss to seal my fate" as I think it's most women's fantasy. I wonder if she'd mind changing places with me lol
Griswold
August 17, 2007

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Very nicely and sensually done for the picture prompt, I just finished one myself for this contest. Best of luck...Scott