Timing is off,
Things gone wrong,
In this moment
There is no room for
Your upbeat news
And sunshine-pouring,
Joy-sprinkling,
"Everything will be fine,"
Attitude.
And know that I don't hate you,
And I don't want to fight.
And know I'll always love you,
But right now I just don't.
A contest entry
- How Do You Say Sorry Quickie PIF by rosepoet.
300 points, ended August 22, 2007, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Excellant
An ool cool write, indeed. Very well written.
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Great write, and well spoken. It flows without hesitation and force, I love it!
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A Beautiful entry indeed
yeah I think so too.
Why woula a friend show up in a storm at your door.
poet
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