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No


No,
not your beauty.

No,
not your intelligence, smile, big heart, small breasts,
the morning in your eyes
the promise in your lips
white skin, broken finger, red shirt with uncountable buttons.

Nor, neither, not even
that fire pouring from your loins’ inferno
purging my thirst with red-hot mud
and awakening suns,
the moths circling your pen holding finger
waiting for the moment you pour the paint on their grayness of wing
to die knowing of being a one night’s Swallowtail,
those sounds escaping your throat’s strings and woodwinds
and percussion and brass and forest birds and mountain brooks
dressing my wake-up moments with never wake-up desires.

No, none of these.
All and more.
You.

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  • Night Hope gold member
    March 23, 2008

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    "No,
    not your beauty."

    This is a wondrous penning, Scribe...One overflowing with all the things that Love supposes...& responds to, from dream. Congratulations on your silver, my Friend. Wanda


  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    August 18, 2007
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    Thank you for your beautiful entry, Josephine


  • Ladybug
    August 18, 2007
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    it is everything and nothing at all

    I know it is

    Tamara


  • Sonja
    August 18, 2007

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    Beauty is more than words, your words are more than poetry, your poetry much more than beauty. It is genuine love
    ~Sonja~


  • SerenityNChains gold member
    August 18, 2007
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