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A Paisley Cravat

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They always met in secret, Jim and his sweetheart Prue,

her father disapproved ,what else were they to do?

 

She, the mill owners daughter, him, a cobbler by trade,

she had no reason to work and he was poorly paid.

 

Their meetings always in darkness, her excuse, a friend was ill

but the bench in the park by the lake, no longer held such a thrill.

 

They knew their love was hopeless, feelings they couldn’t deny

her father insisted she marry, his greed to satisfy.

 

There at the very last meeting, they clung to each other so tight,

undying love was the pact they made, there, together that night.

 

Her gift, a cravat of finest silk, to be worn as Sunday best,

his, a circle of purest gold on her finger, let time be the test.

 

Widowed for many a year, though he never forgot her words,

friends discussing Prues death, by chance Jim overheard.

 

Apart for most of their lifetime, her love never left his heart,

at the graveside that day, upset, alone, after the mourners depart

 

he told her his love was undying, she’d always been his girl,

now on the bench he sits crying, watching the leaves as they swirl.

 

A young girl sits down beside him, his eyes never leave the ground,

she tenderly touches his hand, her voice the only sound.

 

“Hello Jim”, she softly whispers, slowly, so slowly he stands

“I love you, I always have”, together they left holding hands.

 

Jim was found in the morning, at peace now, alone he sat,

on his face a beautiful smile, round his neck, her paisley cravat.

 

 

 

 

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  • Quill
    August 18, 2007
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    Simply beautiful, I love it. Contains all the things I like.


  • arafura
    August 18, 2007

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    peace...

    This is very sad... but sweet at the same time. The poem flows beautifully and builds to a perfect finish. Another fine story told by a fine poet!
    ~arafura~


  • moonbumps silver member
    August 17, 2007
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    Another nice little heart-tugger.
    I get a picture of a man a bit like 'lonely' in Calan!


  • Lily otv
    August 17, 2007

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    Sue, you have a real talent for creating the most wonderful love stories set in beautiful scenes, and so full of emotion. I think this is one of the best I've read from you as it is really heart wrenching in the sadness you've created, but so beautiful in the love it shows. The twist at the end is the icing on the cake. Excellent poem. I hope to read more from you soon


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    August 17, 2007

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    Sad and beautiful

    This was a great piece of writing. The flow and the rhme were brilliant. Very very sad ending with a surprise at the end. And love even overcomes death a the end of this piece as well. The emotion in this was very strong. A sad piece of writing indeed. Very well-written. Well done Sue. I really liked this one.

    Wayne
    xxx

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