"S-u-i-c-i-d-e"
an act we shouldn't judge
neither is it a sin
nor a typical drama
it's just normal
i think...for emo?
We are all gonna die
someday
maybe tomorrow
won't it be better if you
yourself ended it?
ended your own life...
Life is just plain crap
it's just so dull
no excitement
no happiness
yes, Life does suck...
even though it's a cliche to say it
over and over again
life does bring a lot of pain...
people who care too much about their lives.
...those who are afraid to die...
..or afraid to get hurt...
are just staying in the safe side of the road
Please tell me what you think wahhh sorry if you guys didn't appreciate it....
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Well, I enjoyed the flow, but trying to get people to commit suicide isn't a good way to live life.
I also thought that if you didn't try and make people commit suicide, as in lines 10 and 11, you said that it would be better if you yourself ended it. You need to rise above the want to kill yourself, and try and create some peace between yourself and the world.
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This was very tru i agree wit ur opinion
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i liked it...good. life does suck
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remember 50 cent said joy wouldn't feel so good if it wasn't for pain
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wow
i love the darkness in this poem and it really tells a lot
keep writting for it sets us free ah what kinda crap am i saying anyways
love
your friend
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