Its day break
In the heart of this city
It's a hundred degrees
I can't breathe
Don't tell me
You're part of me
Don't tell me
What you want to be
I wont get out
Until I figure it out
All these thoughts
Make no sense
And I don't know if I know me
You say i can trust you
But I wont trust you
As far as i can throw you
Just shut up and leave me alone
I dont need ot hear your lies
I won't listen anymore
I swear I won't
If only i could put you at the bottom of a lake
Just so I can't hear you
You're my alternate ego
And I can't stand you
You promise
Then deliver nothing
And I stand out here
I'm weak and I'm weary
I'll try to kill you
I swear I'll try
Because you are more than evil
And I must banish you away
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Comments from the peanut gallery
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Well now, this I do like. Fighting with
the old alter ego eh? lol.
Fav:
If only i could put you at the bottom of a lake
I especially enjoyed how you've set the scene and
then proceeded to argue with yourself. Wonderful!
Keep penning!
~The INC."
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Nicely done.
Well spoken, at times we all feel like this. Annoyed by our conscience or maybe even someone else. I like this one alot, and you deserve to be applauded on your writing skills. Great Job!
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