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"The Final Change" ---- Vampire Chronicles 10

Lost with in the cavity of the mind,
evil on each cell I find...
Every thought that know resides,
is hatred, and a hunger from deep inside.

Violent thrust upon my grave,
skin now rots, with times decay...
Satan has given a blessing to me,
to live forever, for eternity!

Slamming my fist, with a heavy thud,
but to stay alive, I must drink mortal blood.
Teeth through the flesh, under the dark sky,
if I drink too much, you will surely die.

Old memories lost, myself denied,
another change, from hell inside.
I know my purpose, not to die,
I can't remember, who am I?

Lifting my head, opening my eyes,
an evil grin, they all must die!

As long as I walk, upon the earth,
no one is safe, not even from birth.
I'll blacken the sun, make room for Satan,
beware all mortals, of me... Lord Dracon!

 

 

 

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  • SweetRoses
    June 18, 2008

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    Very awesome write! I love how you made it you that was the vampire in the end. It was a perfect way to end it. This is an excelent write.


  • shadow of the void
    October 9, 2007
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    exelent. but satan did not make vampires. it was the frist and greatist vampire, Lord Kian. and remember their is always some one stronger then you. but you have the blessing of Kian so it will take one of near godly might to kill you, and remember if you get out of control we will come for you. good luck with you war on the humans.


  • sonik
    August 23, 2007

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    it's a bit scary piece....but then in next one somebody got u!!! u've got 2 small holes on your neck - so how is it???


  • onesugar gold member
    August 19, 2007
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    Yeah! right
    Scary you, never.
    Enjoyed this
    Hugs ~onesugar~


  • joleahe
    August 17, 2007
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    I could never fear you! never ever ever....great poem though hermano grande!


  • Riftkin gold member
    August 17, 2007
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    wow I love this but I am sorry to say Lord Dracon, I do not fear you.


  • Dragons Lady
    August 17, 2007

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    Aha. The identity of the vampire revealed. I do hope that this isn't the last. I've enjoyed reading each one. Loved them all.

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