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High

Up, down, rolling around.

Once your up that doubt creeps
in, leaving you inconfident.

You fall fast hitting the floor.
The rush intensifies as you fall,
everything around you becomes a blur.
The feeling of adrenaline pumping
through your veins.

But then you hit something hard,
stopping you dead in your tracks as
you roll around to do it all over
again.

Author notes

i want people to feel the high as there stopped right there in there spot.

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