Who will cry 4 the little gurl
who see's no more
Who will cry 4 the little gurl
who goes to sleep with sorrow
Who will cry 4 the little gurl
who's lost and can't find her way
Who will cry 4 the little gurl
whose pain can't be described
Who will cry 4 the little gurl
whose parents don't want nothing to do with her
Who will cry 4 the gurl
who cuts her skin because of pain
Who will cry 4 the little gurl
if beauty was her money
Who will cry 4 the little gurl
who has no options
Who will cry 4 the litle gurl
if that little gurl was me
A contest entry
- ANYTHING, Just make it good. -->4,000 points by InfiniteCaitlin.
4500 points, ended September 2, 2007, 31 entries
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i love this poem, the emotion is very strong, and the repetition of who would cry 4 the little gurl makes it even stronger. i love i, it's awesome!!!!!
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A very sad poem
written well and full of emotion
~sugar~
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its sad to me
there are children who hurt so much out there...even I cant imagine things felt as a child this heartning...and who will cry when no one else will...I will cry for you if it would help....
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Thank you for sharing this poem with the contest.
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Sad and heart wrenching, I think many can relate to feeling like this at one time or another, good luck.
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SO SAD AND SWEET ..................
THIS WAS VERY PRETTY AND WITH SUCH SADNESS AND WRITTEN WITH SUCH PAIN......................... I COULD REALLY FEEL THE EMOTION IN THIS POEM AS I READ EACH LINE TO THE NEXT....................
FLOWED WONDERFULLY AND WITH BEAUTY................
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR ENTERING INTO MY CONTEST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AND GOOD LUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -
tears fall
i would cry for the litle gurl because she is like me. i enjoyed this and i can understand the pain. very well written
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I'd cry for the little girl and want to scoop her up and hold her in my arms. A very touching write, with lots of depth of emotion. Good luck to you in the contest.
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I think I know where you got the idea for this poem from. I suppose you have made it your own and it is personal to you. So well done.
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