don't say a word
don't close your eyes
don't look away
stay by my side
breathe through your soul
let it all free
know what you feel
feel it with me
show emotion
for the first time
don't control it
let it be mine
give me your heart
don't be greedy
don't be afraid
say you love me
chorus:
i know you feel the pain
of another love sliping away
don't fear the truth
live like this love is new
please give me one last chance
you don't have to reply so fast
do what you think is best for us
and please for once confess your love
:chorus
night slips away
time seems to slow
and with the dark
hurt and pain go
losing remorse
not looking back
the rose passed away
fading to black
yet you're still here
holding me close
you say the truth
so that i know
gripping the knot
so we won't fall
letting us slip
loosing it all
chorus:
i know you feel the pain
of another love sliping away
don't fear the truth
live like this love is new
please give me one last chance
you don't have to reply so fast
do what you think is best for us
and please for once confess your love
:chorus( repeat one time)
wake in morning
the sun aglow
you look through me
emotions grow
you say softly
that you can't lie
i expect love
you say goodbye
Author notes
much luv~
kitty
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Very good. Simple, clean, easy to understand. I didn't really feel sad though, just kind of sorry for the character. It even sounded like a song. Nice
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this is a beautiful write and did make me cry... right now i am fighting the urge that u have described in this because of the fear of it being snatched away. You made the flow work so well and the emotions overflow, very good
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wow...this nearly made me cry...which is kinda hard theese days
it's so emotional...so full of need and the longing for something, for someone...and then to have it right there in front of yew only to have it snatched back away
love and life are both extremly cruel in there own different ways, some people never find love
and some wished they hadn't
i think it's sad that something so pure and strong can cause us so much pain...can make us believe in ourselfs one minute and then the next minute want to end everything we know because the love we feel isn't meant to be...the cruel fate of love is just another sad part of life...
truly great write...full of emotion and depth beyond words...
well done
xxx
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It's very deep, very emotional, sincere. only if they could understand how we feel as well. great write my friend.
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very pretty i liked it
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Wow
It's very deep. I like it, this sounds like what an x did to me.
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wow kitty you sing my song so beautifully words I hold and keep to myself you have spoken so well I feel these emotions the same as you i live them all the day long
deep is my sorrow and grief I want to hug you. -
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thankyou so much uziphiel. it's always good to look up and realize that you are not alone, isn't it?
much luv~
kitty
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i really love this song! this is one of those songs that people would love to listen to and could blast it up and cry there heart out. i really love this it is amazing this is the first song i have ever read on this sight and if this is anything like the others then i might just be reading and commenting more songs now.
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thankyou so much!!!!!!
much luv~
kitty
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Wow! This beautifully written! I love it! Such hopeful yet sad emotion...you give your all and you expect the same but it is not given in return! Sometimes that is the way life and love is but you still have to take that chance because you never know if this will be the one or not! False hope can be an enemy indeed if you follow its path because it is hard to guard your heart when you must leave it open in order for love to enter! Take care and be well! I wish you good luck!
K
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a very beautiful song. I could hear its melody. My favorite part was:
"don't say a word
don't close your eyes
don't look away
stay by my side
breathe through your soul
let it all free
know what you feel
feel it with me
show emotion
for the first time
don't control it
let it be mine"
I feel the same way!
Keep up the good work
Creatress -
you say softly
that you can't lie
i expect love
you say goodbye
maybe the most amazing poem ive read on this website.
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