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Dream Sewer

Mirror's glare
in drowsy eyes.
I look at the diabolic God
who has risen from my bed.

Splash!

I wash away the sleep
that's snoring on my face

as I try to recollect
what I dreamt.

It seems that the dream
has already gone through the sinkhole,
draining down the pipeline

to become one in a sewer
of dreams...

 

Every dream now belongs

to the municipality.

 

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  • The Pole Star
    August 19, 2007
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    oh dear...had this been penned to make me laugh then it's very successful
    Keep Up


  • Tangled Angle
    August 18, 2007
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    Interesting concept, your style sure has changed, lol. Nice work. Best of luck in the contest.