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Insomniac


Black circles under sunken eyes
Are rewards to the poet’s mind;
Blank stares to the mighty sun
Are from precious moments with the fading stars.

For stars are the poet’s birthday candles
While the moon pretends to be the magician;
The black night throws such a fabulous party
That spills amazing colors to the poet’s illusions.

But everything is over when the sun crashes in
He takes center stage and pulls down the curtain;
Now sleepless nights and would-be masterpieces
Put to end the insomniac's fantasies.

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  • Danna Hobart
    September 2, 2007
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    Great images. Thank you for entering.


  • 2lullabyhaven
    August 23, 2007
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    Wow

    So elegantly captured and penned. You are a mighty fine poet. Good luck in the contest. lol