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Forever In My Dreams

 
I am not sure I can say this in a prose
Not sure I know what to say at all
I know this prose is not without reason
this poem is from me just for you.
What I think and what I know for sure
aren't the same, yet not so very different
There is only one thing in life for sure
and that is, you never really know.
The things that require my judgment
choices I have or decisions I make
especially involving other people
cannot be what is just best for me.
Whether it be in friendship or love
loving or being in love with someone
in any relation nothings more important
than the bond of trust two people have.
Trust has no room for the selfish
it has no room for the inconsiderate
nor those who would compromise truth
honesty, friendship or love for self gain.


We are human, my dear friend, we have feelings;
compassion, wishes, hopes, faith, sorrows,
joy, romance, love in our hearts and dreams
there is no disgrace or shame in having feelings.
Whatever we give and share from our hearts
all in life we do that lifts another's spirit
what is true to and in the heart is true in life
how can we say the dreams in our hearts are not?
"Know the salience of feelings within my heart
for they are the visions of truth I must follow"


When I think of you
my heart warms like the sun
I see clear sky mountain meadows

where fields of wild flowers bloom
feel cool breeze soothing caress
Your compassion sparkles
like night skies star coruscate
I see moonlight shadows forest trees
hear the crickets chirping
I find love's Shepherd spirit
In my heart I love your dreams
watch the cabins candle light
warming by the river rock fireplace
timeless passion in your heart
my heart comes to know you're giving soul.


You see you are an angel
It's not hard for my heart to see
this love you give is very real
like the breath of air is to a lung
your precious love is to my empty heart.
Believe me dear friend since the day we met
you have given this old mans despair
the loving company of your care
stirred my hopes and hearts dreams
Love is something every human should have
not just to keep but to give one another
It's the trust, like I said before,
that makes love that is real
How could I see a heart
big and giving as yours

and not love you
or trust you.
No one gives from their heart like you
not wanting for themselves
like you do
unless they are truly
a friend.
Friendship is love
trust in love
is truly the hearts beginning
what is true to heart
is true to life.
I trust you
know what you're doing

and believe me, Love
you can trust me
and I will always
be your friend.


The many nights since we met
you cared enough to do your best
The compliments, words of praise
all you've done to lift my spirits
compassion you have shown for me
(and I am sure to many others)
is nothing short of heaven sent.


For me your an angel to my heart
just as in life.
Love in my dreams
just as love in my heart.
You are in my life
forever in my dreams.

 

 

 

 


 

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  • Three Doves
    August 24, 2007

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    Stay in flight my friend feathers surround you on love's breath you soar. Well written a pleasure to read thank you for sharing.


  • Onerogueleft
    August 20, 2007

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    Simply Outstanding

    The words have an old-world charm, not seen today it seems. They speak of a tenderness and gratitiude so long forgotten, and cast aside. I really felt drawn to the ideal of the truth and dedication so strongly felt in each of the messages brought out to the other person. I really enjoyed the strength and powerful twnangs on my heart when I finished reading this work. Well done, poet.

  • blaizenaway
    August 20, 2007

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    Full of wisdom and truth the depth of this poem screams that an "old soul" has written it. The love expressed is beautiful and true and tells of your hearts greatness thank you for sharing


  • Rose Angel gold member
    August 19, 2007

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    Ethereal Love Poem

    I am so impressed with the wisdom shown here in this most beautiful, loving write!You spared no words in going into depth,about trust and trust and friendship being love,about so much one could not put into this little comment!This is so moving,I have never read anything so expressive of love as I have this write!It encompasses sharing dreams,and what she is to him, in so many beautiful ways, beyond what many women will ever hear...It is the most tender loving expressive, beautiful write of feelings of tribute and love one could ever read, and the committment to that love that seems to be lasting....One would have to rewrite it all to say what one truly feels, and the one for whom it is written. A magnificent write and a treasure to that one he writes it for!Too beautiful, beyond expression! Truly, the poet knows love and knows how to express it in words, and in every way imaginable!Thank you for sharing this! Others who have read this treasure, and the one who it is for..is deeply moved, I can assure you!


  • Angel Wolf
    August 19, 2007
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    WOW!!! Its been so long since I came on the site and that poem catched my eye and I must admit that my insticts didn't fail me again for what beauty I have found in your words... Words that warms my soul.. I adore it... Who ever that person is its is a very lucky one... Truly... Your words are beautifull as always.. Please never stop writting my dear friend...


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    August 18, 2007

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    You have said so much here. These feelings run so deep that it had to be hard to express them with your pen. I sometimes get so overwhelmed with my feelings that I cant find the words. There seems to be no words that can nor will describe what I feel..You did a wonderful job expressing your feelings. They flowed so easily and honestly. A beautiful masterpiece of love, life and trust.
    Thank you for sharing with me...Much love always,
    Soulful Woman


  • BeautifulFlame
    August 17, 2007

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    WOW! This was amazing my brother !
    This was such truth and from the heart !
    You got my respect as always as a poet and a friend!

    Whether it be in friendship or love
    loving or being in love with someone
    in any relation nothings more important
    than the bond of trust two people have.
    Trust has no room for the selfish
    it has no room for the inconsiderate
    nor those who would compromise truth
    honesty, friendship or love for self gain.



    sis
    ~Lisa~


  • dustookie2
    August 17, 2007

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    Yeah love is all of this HH and much more that just cannot be said in words.....it goes beyond words into the stars and moon it surrounds you with a glow and warmth think we tend to hide our feelings till it is too late or time has passed us by. Your words flow from the heart full of expressive description which sing as you guide me on the journey i see reflective images in the mirror of life...very well crafted from your heart HH thank you for the pleasure so many truths and wisdom words to live by. good luck in the contest.

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