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Shining

sunshine behind cloud
love for a beautiful girl
are moments away

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For Anna.

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  • HeavenonEarth
    October 14, 2007

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    ...
    I bet she smiled!
    You are sharing these with them aren't you?
    Blessings Neighbor
    Missed you~
    ~Joy

    • lkcl
      October 14, 2007
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      ha ha yes, as a matter of fact


  • poeticweaver gold member
    September 3, 2007

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    Great

    Awe, nice to know that special someone is always near as much as dear to your heart. Thanks for sharing... Peace, Timothy aka poeticweaver~

    • lkcl
      September 4, 2007
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      thank you tim!
      anna needed some encouragement, and i couldn't help it. total romantic that i am...
      l.


  • crimsondew
    August 19, 2007
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    Beautiful.... It expresses the beauty of love, beauty of nature and the beauty of your sweetheart!

    • lkcl
      August 19, 2007
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      dear crimsondew,
      *sigh* well as usually happens with me, anna is somebody else's sweetheart but she is _so_ pretty, _so_ full of life and honesty and integrity that it really wasn't long before this poem found its way through me.
      it leaves me wondering, you know - how many pretty girls is it possible for me to love?? and all at the same time!


  • Bluebook Pet
    August 18, 2007

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    How could I compare thee to a summer day
    Thou art more lovely and more temperate...

    • lkcl
      August 19, 2007
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      hehe dear ang lim thank you - now i'm inspiring people to quote shakespeare. the funny thing is that this girl really _is_ more lovely and more temperate than a summer's day.

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