a circle enveloped my earth and line
passed crossways torched and mistled fine
with empty hearthways fired from sight
i worshipped everything from day unto night
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felt nice
short and sweet if a little obscure..what is mistled, I'm unfamiliar with this term but assume its not a typo..I liked it because I wanted to know more.
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mistled
i made it up - "mistled" - to be covered in "mistletoe" an abbreviation for to be "mistletoed"
but also hinting at "misted", being only one letter difference.
it's zen - it's supposed to be obscure!
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OHH! Very well done..Interesting!
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thank you! i can't recall now what inspired it... oh yes: sitting with (another) pretty girl - not the same one as "Shining" is for (!) in the middle of the edinburgh spiral maze.
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Good inspiration...
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