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Suffuring Hearts, Share The Great News

Beaming lights of golden
rays cast upon the sea,
Illuminating the confusion
conflicting the world

Hurricanes swarm the
hearts of men, secrets
of truth, hidden from
their eyes

Abundant bliss
not shared, the
Great news is
barely bellowed  

Break the cycle
Spread the word
Share the bliss
cast glory upon
the heavy hearts

Tell them all
Tell them about
their freedom
let them know

Tell them all
tell them the
truth, share Jesus
and his love with all

Author notes

We all need to share the good news, be fruitful and mutiply

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  • koupolga
    August 17, 2007

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    Moving poem

    Really enjoyed this piece, I especially like the last two stanzas and the shortness of the lines - they bring out the meaning the power of the words. Thank you very much for the entry!

  • Mercury Rising
    August 17, 2007

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    A very lovely hymn you have composed here in expression of your faith and devotion. Best of luck in my contest, and thanks for entering this excellent poem

    David