Beaming lights of golden
rays cast upon the sea,
Illuminating the confusion
conflicting the world
Hurricanes swarm the
hearts of men, secrets
of truth, hidden from
their eyes
Abundant bliss
not shared, the
Great news is
barely bellowed
Break the cycle
Spread the word
Share the bliss
cast glory upon
the heavy hearts
Tell them all
Tell them about
their freedom
let them know
Tell them all
tell them the
truth, share Jesus
and his love with all
Author notes
We all need to share the good news, be fruitful and mutiply
In a list
A contest entry
- Sacred Chants & Hymns Of Praise by Mercury Rising.
1000 points, ended August 17, 2007, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Make me FALL IN LOVE with FREE VERSE!! by koupolga.
450 points, ended August 20, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Moving poem
Really enjoyed this piece, I especially like the last two stanzas and the shortness of the lines - they bring out the meaning the power of the words. Thank you very much for the entry!
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A very lovely hymn you have composed here in expression of your faith and devotion. Best of luck in my contest, and thanks for entering this excellent poem
David


