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I'm Torn

A secret love affair
Between our eyes

In a crowded room
You leave me breathless

Captivated
Within your gaze

I ache for more
As you casually walk out

I know I could follow
We would continue

This intimate dance
We share through our eyes

Although
I know that if I did

It would become
Forbiddingly physical

For I can not resist
Your boyish smile

Your lips
Your face

Your hypnotic charm
I drop my eyes away

With a sinking heart
I wonder if it’s lonely

Being in love
With a married woman

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  • peridotPixi
    April 1

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    yeah i feel like this sometimes, i know there are some people who are probley lonely being in love with a married woman, keep up the great writing, ~Amy


  • LadySerenity
    December 4, 2008
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    Wow this is pretty amazing. I love it!!!
    Very well written

    ~*Lady Serenity


  • Regenhart
    August 17, 2007
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    my, this is good
    If someone would write a poem like that about me... wow