Shouting and silence
go together
so also light and darkness
it signifies
while one stops
others takes over.
Opposites coexist
Thunder drives away calm
before calmness makes comeback
tussle is apparent
as each comes out of the other.
A crest and a trough
in opposites
makes a wave
complement each other
but never separates from each other.
Does duality
is a response
balance each other
like electron and proton
in a stable atom.
Evil transformed
Becomes good and vice-versa
A human nature never in duality
It is the responses
That result in apparent duality.
Author notes
Duality is only response
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oh wow, i really really like this part of your poem
"Opposites coexist
Thunder drives away calm"
that part is incredible.
i just like the whole, i dont know
south pole-north pole vibe it gave me.
if you know what i mean.
but i find this deep.
Your imagery and flow were just amazing. -
This is such a lovely poem. You have written such great things here and it all fits together perfectly. I love the stanza about the trough and crest and together it makes a wave. Really great work.
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life acquires meaning induality
A human nature never in duality
It is the responses
That result in apparent duality." nice write dear Venu.
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