Something deep inside every person
Over every sea and star it has covered
Universes to large for us too imagine
Love has only seen a glimpse of it
Our SOUL
Please tell me what you think
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Nice idea and very creative!
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S.O.UL.
VERY Good--play with it and it will grow as a flower goes from a bud into full bloom.
You do live up to your name--Beautiful -
awsome
beautifuly writen end of story -
simple and true
Your have a delightful style your welcomed to read A writ I wrote called SOIL...
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Well, I guess as we're correcting spelling I'll add another. The first TO in the third line should be TOO.
Aside from the pedanticness I thought it was a great poem. I'm rather fond of short poems as long as they flow well like this and the fact that they get their point across in only a few lines is something my scientific mind enjoys.
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You need to respell the word in line four GLIMSE like GLIMPSE. That's just the way it's spelled.
Other then that, I thought it was a very true and deep write, Beautiful. I enjoyed this piece very much and thought you did a good job with the flow, as well.
Nicely done and keep on writing!
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