Liar,
deceiver,
throwing away love
like yesterday's garbage.
They say the proof
is in the pudding.
If that's the case,
yours smells foul!
I need hard proof.
Your sweet, candy coated lies
don't measure a whit anymore!
You're like cyanide laced with sugar.
Your promises like
the venom of snakes,
poisonous to my very soul.
Silent seduction on every corner.
Love doesn't come
with terms and conditions.
Your lease is up,
eviction, your final notice.
Author notes
"prove to me you love me unconditionally."
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A contest entry
- QUICKIE....My last one. by PassionsPromise.
550 points, ended August 17, 2007, 10 entries
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Sometimes we need a palate cleanser.
Nice one.
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Ouch, pure venom here. It is sometimes healing to vent a bit. Great passion and emotion in this write. btw HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
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wow
very powerful words Love doesn't come
with terms and conditions.
Your lease is up,
eviction, your final notice.
my favorite part great write here
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yes, send him packing with or without bags.
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Wow sis these are such powerful lines "Love doesn't come
with terms and conditions.
Your lease is up,
eviction, your final notice." Just an amazing write so full of emotions. Just woo congrats on the shinny
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I liked this poem! No beating around the bush here, great write!
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Oh very well done, sounds like a litany of some sort, In fact I think my Ex said all this once.
Best of luck to you...Scott
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yea well thanks glad to know i get a notice,best of luck
Tory -
Shattered I am, show me the love.
or
Prove to me that you can love me unconditionally,
Or am I just a game to you.
Or hell if you hate me, tell me that to I don’t give a shit.
The one that can really make me feel it wins…
All there is too it.
Any form, shape, size, hell I could care if you tapped it with your toes.
As long as I understand it we are cool.
Thanks to all whom returned
Good luck
Tory
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