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A Rainbow Angel's Heart

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Dark serenity seeping through the lines

Penned personifications drawing attention
gaining awareness of desires
but not sharing them so willingly

Plucking the meaning of life with thoughts
that inspire creations of the mind
Sweet interaction with a touch of coyness
yet a subtle twinge of sensuality  creeping
up from deep within the crevices of maturity

Colorful rainbows filling the pages
with delightful enchantments
Describing  worldly wants and needs
Love and compassion awaits the eyes of the reader
Within the writes of
A  Rainbow  Angel’s Heart




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  • JinSays gold member
    September 8, 2007
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    Sweet interaction with a touch of coyness
    yet a subtle twinge of sensuality creeping
    up from deep within the crevices of maturity

    That's sweet enough to eat.
    You have captured the spirit of growing up so besutifully!!
    She's a very pretty girl, and by your words, I can feel the love you have for her.
    Just lovely,
    Jin


  • tomisb gold member
    August 17, 2007
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    The magic of the soul is the joy in the heart. Love so often told is a river that feeds the magic and holds close when all else falls apart.
    Lovely words and sweet, sweet thoughts. A gentleness describe in a poem that lies warm and safe inside the dreams of a loved ones heart.
    Love, Tom B.


  • Ephiphany gold member
    August 17, 2007

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    Wonderful Tribute

    you got here Godmother....as usual you have over exceeded your Love, keep being the beautiful Soulful Woman that you are.

    Epif


  • tawk gold member
    August 17, 2007

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    Such a beautiful tribute to one you care about so much. Wow I know she will love this!! Amazing words. Excellent flow and meter. I so loved this


  • Whoochi gold member
    August 17, 2007
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    Excellent penning, and am sure she is pleased with your words...

  • x-Black-Butterfly-x silver member
    August 17, 2007

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    mark what you on about special lol
    this was a wonderful write and i think it descrbes the hidden side of me really well lol.
    it made me think and i really loved it.
    it was beautifully written and each line flowed beautifully into each other
    thankyou so much


  • markgrif gold member
    August 16, 2007

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    awww..
    Great dedication for someone I know to be a special girl!
    She gonna love it.

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