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Myfulempheezia

Marmalade skies

crystal tear rivers

watching white birds as they fly

They cut through those painful

[NiGhTmArEs]

Yet from wht I learn from them is so gainful

Those wonder worlds so far away

and it's not worth reaching

yet you still don't want to stay

Refuse to give in

[LoSeS]

Expectations are high

Opportunity comes

many times

like raindrops

The insanity loathes you

[BrEaK AwAy]

Unleash that emotion

Masked strangers

say 'who are you'

pull them off

And realize

[ItS AcTuAlLy yOu]

And what do you do

When you find that same person

who's exactly equal to you

made for what

That you isn't just you

[It's a lIvInG MeMoRy]

More like God's joke

Dole out his anger on us

giving nothing but sad phases

it's not life anymore

It has become

[HeLL]

From a crack in the window

~superstitions come alive~

Author notes

Made it for no reason. o.o

It's made up word, so what? o.O

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  • innocence jaded.xx
    October 18, 2007

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    WOW :]

    Now this is incredible. Everything about this poem just left me in complete awe...again :] Of course, all your poems usually do. haha
    I loved the whole effect with this [BrEaK AwAy;; etc]
    That really added a great touch to this whole poem.

    *Masked strangers
    say 'who are you'
    pull them off
    And realize
    [ItS AcTuAlLy yOu]*

    Ooooh. I love the mystery that kind of fills those lines. Those words are absolutely perfect =]
    Again.
    Great poem!! I loveloveLOVE this one. You're an ahmazinggg writer !!


    • MagicaI
      October 18, 2007
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      Nyck Nyck

      I just happened to read it again.. compared to yours.. mine isn't good enough >.<


  • EmilyRoseFrank
    August 17, 2007

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    "More like God's joke
    Dole out his anger on us
    giving nothing but sad phases
    it's not life anymore
    It has become
    [HeLL]
    From a crack in the window"

    I love the ending. For something that was made for no reason...it's beautiful. It feels sad...I hope you're not sad. *hugs*