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Haiku - ConCATenation

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Curled on curlicue
A split hair haiku can purr,
Trapping mice on cue

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Acrostic Haiku/Senryu CAT


ConCATenation : the act of linking together as in a series or chain a consecutive series of symbols or events or ideas etc

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  • Topnotchsy
    August 17

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    Yeesh, another great haiku/acrostic/rhyming piece. I still don't know how you do it. It's a like writing a jig saw puzzle, but where the words actually mean something.

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  • crazymomma
    July 7

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    I like the way this haiku is also an acrostic. Very creative indeed. I love cats and have 9 of them. I hate when the catch mice and bring them in the house though LOL

  • bryansgirl04
    June 27

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    very well written

    i really enjoyed reading this poem i wish i could write a very unique haiku i love cats and i can tell that your inspiration must of been your cat well i am glad that you shared your poem with me and again i really enjoyed reading this

  • Lily otv
    October 25, 2007

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    I was intrigued by the title of this poem and learned something tonight. I can just imagine a cat curled on a culicue now. Though not a great fan of haiku I think this poem has shown me how it can purr, especially when formed in conjunction with an acrostic.

  • NoWayJo
    September 7, 2007

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    I think yours is the first Acrostic Form haiku I've come to read, and each line works well to the overall image and wonderful haiku-moment--(Wonderful except for the mice that is)!

    Enjoyed the read!

    Jo

  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    August 18, 2007
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    Interesting

    I really am amazed by this poem! what really amazed me was how you pulled this poem off like that. it really looked good and I felt the flow was a little interesting and well I never seen such a style. any ways this is just a btilliant well penned Haiku and just an all round good one. keep up the good work

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