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Curled on curlicue
A split hair haiku can purr,
Trapping mice on cue
Author notes
Acrostic Haiku/Senryu CAT
ConCATenation : the act of linking together as in a series or chain a consecutive series of symbols or events or ideas etc
pics
http://photobucket.com/image/animated%20cat/gwsp3/Cat__Mouse_animated.gif?o=41
http://photobucket.com/image/animated%20cat/IMAOZI/animated/bigmouthkitten.gif?o=3
http://photobucket.com/image/animated%20cat/ayla1209/Animated%20Gifs/electrocat.gif?o=170
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A contest entry
- Humor, and or Nature Haiku by misticmoonlite.
665 points, ended January 14, 27 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Courtesy welcome and extended
Comments
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hehehe!!!
Very funny.
loved it
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nice haiku, acroustics and rhyming...you do it all...lol.
what silly pictures
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lol I loved this one
you have creative forms and this is just as cute as the first, thank you for this entry as well , good luck...mm
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Charming!
♥ Kathraina -
Yeesh, another great haiku/acrostic/rhyming piece. I still don't know how you do it. It's a like writing a jig saw puzzle, but where the words actually mean something.
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I like the way this haiku is also an acrostic. Very creative indeed. I love cats and have 9 of them. I hate when the catch mice and bring them in the house though LOL
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very well written
i really enjoyed reading this poem i wish i could write a very unique haiku i love cats and i can tell that your inspiration must of been your cat well i am glad that you shared your poem with me and again i really enjoyed reading this -
I was intrigued by the title of this poem and learned something tonight. I can just imagine a cat curled on a culicue now. Though not a great fan of haiku I think this poem has shown me how it can purr, especially when formed in conjunction with an acrostic.
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I think yours is the first Acrostic Form haiku I've come to read, and each line works well to the overall image and wonderful haiku-moment--(Wonderful except for the mice that is)!
Enjoyed the read!
Jo -
Interesting
I really am amazed by this poem! what really amazed me was how you pulled this poem off like that. it really looked good and I felt the flow was a little interesting and well I never seen such a style. any ways this is just a btilliant well penned Haiku and just an all round good one. keep up the good work
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