suspended by love
as dark as bloodred velvet
crushed against cruel hope
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt - Haiku by deleteit.
900 points, ended August 16, 2007, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
1 - 5 of 5
-
"-)
-
Oh My!
Now this is another very brilliantly penned poem and I really liked the whole theme to the basis for this Haiku. anyways this is just a very well deserved broze winner poem and the wording is excellent and supreme and nothing compares to this. nice work and keep it up and congrats again
-
Many a man and woman have felt those strains of shackles to someone they loved who may have or may not have returned the sentiments in quite the same measure. I like the way you envisioned this. Your words bring life to the image portrayed.
♥ Touchof1der
-
Vivid imagery here! Congrats on your Bronze, this was lovely!
-
I do love the way you think! This is a fantastic creation that brings so much to the mind while reading it...and even leaving me with an after effect. That is a good thing. Thank you for this and best of luck in the contest
Adding your comment:
1 - 5 of 5
