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Hail to Reality

the beauty of minds eye
bestows the view of sight
and understanding within
captivate the cresting knowledge
of senses inward locked
none seeing the rays of fragile life
behold the light is ours
to every emotion real and unreal
the mind is glamorous to very own treats
that tickle its fantasy
so search the reality of the tickle
hail to the reality you were taught
all others may constitute mental
protect and share the thoughts only
here to this realm of belief
dear God is your book?

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  • Mercury Rising
    August 17, 2007

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    A very interesting entry indeed that speaks to that solemn and calm clarity in a world of smoke and mirrors of illusion. Best of luck in my contest, and thanks for entering this wonderful poem.

    David