Now you all know the story of Jack
And at his beanpole he did hack
After he stole really quick
A golden laying chick
Now here is something most don't know
But there is a story after the pole
Little jack by all means
Helped himself to some new beans
So whenever he needs
He plants the beans
And climbs the stalk
To the giant he doesn't talk
Then he meets sweet Gretel
The attraction is as firm as metal
Jealous is the one called Hans
Because he wants to be fairest in the lands
Then comes little riding hood
And even the tank engine that could
The run through children's minds grim
And then there is always death upon them
Author notes
fairytales rock!"
Jack and the beanstock
Hansel and Gretel
Little Red Riding Hood
The Tank Engine That Could
A contest entry
- Twisted Fairytales! Yay!!! Come in and see by LadyOfFate.
600 points, ended August 19, 2007, 18 entries
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Comments
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I really like this one a bunch!!!!! So, filled with imagination!!!!!!!!!!! Combining many fairy tales into one I feel gave a wonderful kick to this piece!!!!!! Thank you for sharing!!!!!!!!!!!! Good luck with the contest!!!!!!!!!!!
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the tank engine that could? you mean the little engine that could? oh well very nice and twisted, didn't make much sense but oh well. very nicely done. good work and good luck
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